Moon Petals

Moon Petals

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic little scribble ~

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Aleksey Marina Photography

 

 

 

Flowers dance in the evening breeze

petals scattering wildly

as the sounds of poetry trickle from passion’s lips

teasing wanting hearts

 

Night falls

 

Gather the shadows darling

Let's dance and let the breeze

carry us away

like…

 

Moon petals

~~~

 

© 2014 MsJewel


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Beautiful artwork and words.
"Let's dance and let the breeze
carry us away
like…
Moon petals"
Nice place to be would be dancing and flowing with the breeze. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Julie.



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I love the phrase "moon petals" which conjures up a ton of softly-dynamic imagery in the reader's mind. This font is hard to read & should be avoided. Not fun to read. I love how your artwork inspired your words & work well together (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


And now we have you back with us as if a
gift of Heaven's Grace fell upon a fertile field
where seeds will germinate with Petals of Romance.
Welcome home, dear heart. tenderly, Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful and very romantic. :-))

Kaze~

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short and beautiful. The title is very catchy and I was not able to resist myself from checking it out and I must admit,it was worth it. Well Done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
wordsofheart

9 Years Ago

My pleasure,Julie :)
You could sing me and dance me anywhere in one of your poems that would make me smile.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sigh...a breath air reading you hon :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
Beautiful artwork and words.
"Let's dance and let the breeze
carry us away
like…
Moon petals"
Nice place to be would be dancing and flowing with the breeze. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Julie.
Ooooh :D Very nice! Great description and beautiful choice of words! :) Great job!!! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
This is just lovely... compact and elegant... chock full of "sounds of poetry trickl[ing] from passion’s lips." Nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie
The words in this danced slowly in my head as I read this beautiful piece. You write of such fond memories that can only be created by pure love.

Regards
Troy

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Troy :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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