The Waterfall

a collaboration with trace

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

On silken skin, soft as dew

in loves embrace, just we two

float in heaven's smooth cascade

upon the fantasy we made

 

sway with me

play with me

stay with me

 

‘til my thirst is quenched at last

and your heart is beating fast

and your breath is swept away

in the velvet waters spray

 

scheme with  me

dream with me

scream with me

 

as the water turns to mist

in the wake of your warm kiss

and reality seems to fade

as all the dreams we’ve made…

 

tumble as we recall

the pleasure of it all

Loving in the Waterfall

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Not much that I can say that hasn't already been said by the other...water is a beautiful thing, and I don't know why, but water and romance just seem to feed off of each other...water is my ruling element (yes, I do pay some attention to astrology haha) so maybe I'm more sensitive to it than others, but the passion of this piece practically came at me in 3-D...you two never fail to make beautiful music together...another great one :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Steve L.]

Beautifully done!!! Really love the "with me" parts.

[Fran Marie]

A beautiful soft and romantic write...a great collaboration...

[MsJewel]

Thank you Fran :) Julie

[KAREN]

Excellent job you two. This poem was crafted into a beautiful passionate romantic piece of art.

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[KAREN]

You're welcome!

[Deepwater]

you have penned a great love poem the Waterfall good job keep writing

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment ;)Julie

[willweb]

What a wonderful and stirring piece you two have created. Julie and Trace, this is absolutely beautiful. It was so seamless I had no idea it was a collaboration as I read this.

[MsJewel]

Trace and I have been writing together for so long - we can finish each other's sentences. I am blessed to have such a wonderful friend to write with - I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. It was one of our very first collaborations. :) Julie

[willweb]

One of your first? Wow, it was my pleasure to read and now knowing that I feel honored as well. I have found that of late with a friend here but ours is more humor based. It is still fun.

[Frieda P]

Steamy indeed! I'm swept away by your sultry waterfall, a most titillating collaboration. Both such excellent poets but together you guys rock!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Frieda. This was one of our first collaborations. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

i love the mix of a woman's heart and the visual male arousal .. all under a waterfall ..which i love and instantly hooked me .. this is the stuff of love in my book .. well done you two!
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie

[emmajoy]

Amazingly sensuous! Yet for me, so carefully worded it offers the gentle tidal art of loving rather than the torrent that just drowns emotions. There's passion in this for sure, but, also the feeling of sharing rather than thrusting self. This is 'WE' not merely 'I'!

A great collaboration, truly.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Emmajoy. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Have a lovely day! :) Julie