Julie, the imagery used in this piece is so descriptive the words seem to come to life. I could single them out but I'd be writing all night. The one I like most is, "...whirling in an overflowing palette of tangerine kisses..." There used to be a band called Tangerine Dream, and their music was progressive rock, very ethereal and moody; this piece has that type of flavor to it, and I mean that in the best possible way. A poem to touch the heart. take care...dan
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9 Years Ago
That name Tangerine Dream sounds familiar to me, but I don't know their music. I'm thrilled you enj.. read moreThat name Tangerine Dream sounds familiar to me, but I don't know their music. I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem Dan. We had such a beautiful sunrise yesterday, I had to write about it. :) Julie
Julie, the imagery used in this piece is so descriptive the words seem to come to life. I could single them out but I'd be writing all night. The one I like most is, "...whirling in an overflowing palette of tangerine kisses..." There used to be a band called Tangerine Dream, and their music was progressive rock, very ethereal and moody; this piece has that type of flavor to it, and I mean that in the best possible way. A poem to touch the heart. take care...dan
Posted 9 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
That name Tangerine Dream sounds familiar to me, but I don't know their music. I'm thrilled you enj.. read moreThat name Tangerine Dream sounds familiar to me, but I don't know their music. I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem Dan. We had such a beautiful sunrise yesterday, I had to write about it. :) Julie
For some reason, this poem gave me a warmth Hug that I enjoyed.
"I’ll gather the breeze
fanned with change"
Those lines are very creative and the poem itself its just amazing
Great work on this one, going to my favorites
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9 Years Ago
Thank you my sweet friend. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :) Julie
A tide of soft emotions sweeping us out to sea......ahhhhh...this is romance! You are the queen of romantic poetry, no doubt in my mind. Superb imagery. Lydi**
i am often swept up in your poetry...how you create fantasy "floating in a sea of golden light"
your poetry is like 50 shades of nature and love getting together intimately.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for your very sweet words Jacob. We had such a beautiful sunrise over the ocean yesterday... read moreThank you for your very sweet words Jacob. We had such a beautiful sunrise over the ocean yesterday...it was poetry.. :) Julie
I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's.
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