In the Mist

~ a romantic scribble ~

      

 

In the Mist….

 

He breathes in the cool night air

a vision as light as the mist

                                sweeping my window

 

Haunting memories etched upon my heart

 

unforgettable…yes…

for I’ve felt the tenderness of his touch, his lips

soft,

                           silky,

                                        wet

                 as the night sheds her dew

                          yet is still

as I search for words as lovely as he

 

He is all things beautiful…perhaps not to another’s eye

but to me…

 

He is the whisper in the silence of a dream

weaving the moonlight

                stirring the stars

                                sparkling silver wishes

                                             falling

                  as soft as a summer rain

 

            Leaving me a bit misty eyed

as he flows through my fingers

                impossible to capture

                      except in the mist

 sweeping my window

 

Author's Note

photography compliments of pinterest

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' He is the whisper in the silence of a dream .. .. .. '

Part glory, part tragedy and both... all. wrapped with tenderness, longing and.. a maybe good bye. The end of your poem is more than most such poems, you're speaking aloud, not from paper or screen.. i feel you're hiding behind every word. This comes across as fact, not.. make believe.. is beautiful.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Beautiful romantic poetry Julie.
Your muse takes you to some beautiful places. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Cherry :) Julie

[Adam Adams]

Very beautiful scenario of rain & "warmth" i've seen across the analogies of love & "mist". Thought invoking though phenomenally romantic poetry it is.

"He is the whisper in the silence of a dream" Wonderful line. It portrays how badly the heart needs someone to remove the phrases of loneliness off unbound life. Sweetly written!

[MsJewel]

Your comments are always so encouraging. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Red Diamond Crew]

I really liked the use of orientation with the words. It added to the reading style and made it more interesting to read!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

A warm to moderate temp rising of a lovely romantic write just oozing in flow!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Andrew :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Romantic! Just enjoyed this piece:)
From wonderful wording to beautiful photos,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

Thanks for your kind words James. :) Julie

[onceloved]

This is such a very beautiful poem/picture presentation they compliment one another so beautifully I really enjoy reading ALL of writing. :) A FAN

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

I love to comment on your poetry Julie. :) Larry

[jeannemarie coulter]

exquisite and well penned

[Valentine]

You are such a romantic. You are making wonder just who is sharing all of this bliss with you> Valentine

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Kathie :) Julie

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i feel heavy in the chest after reading this, Julie... so warm and soft the words but so sad the underpinnings of sorrow at having experienced the loss of such love... makes one misty eyed...just beautiful, my friend