Love is a Flower

This is a song I wrote...I just now made it up...Probably not very good....Its ment to be kind of a whinny rock song...

Verse one:

Holdin hands in hallway...Im not quite sure if were a thing or not...So many questions runnin' through my mind. Its ovewhelming. You dare me to kiss you the next morning...We both missed it. Then you were dating her, names said...Hearts' were broken mine. Were talkin again, and then say...

 

 

Chorus: Why did you say thoughs things to me! How could you make me feel that way?

What do I say?! What do I do?! I felt betrayed! Its not the same for you...For you.

 

 

Verse two: I finally hang up after listen to the dial for hours, and, begin to cry! Don't ask me why...I know its over, though it never happend...Theirs not a chance now. Love like a flower, Out rose wasn't nourished, it didn't make it through the harsh winters.

 

Bridge: How can I live with this pain of losin something special, now all i can think...Is you...All I can say...Is please! Please! Take me! Take me! Take me! TAKE ME!

 

Chorus: Why did you do thoughs things to me! How could you make me feel that way?

What do I say?! What do I do?! I felt betrayed! Its not the same for you....For you.

 

Verse three: I have decided to let you go...You can't fool with my heart anymore. And I have decided...Its all your fault...All your blame...All my pain, all again...I won't this mistake again...Ohwoahwhoah Oh.

Reviews

[Linear]

Chorus....Those, Take your time to re-read this, some minor errors, words left out etc, but it's a really good song/poem, I think you did very well

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I can almost hear the music to accompany this poignant song~ great composition!~

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pretty cool song. I like this

[KAREN]

Would love to hear this to music! Emotional, sad and so good!

[Kelly M.]

This is a good song... it's a little sad.. I like to make songs and sing them to my family. Great job on your first song! I'm sure you're proud of it. :)

[Inkcognito]

It guess it could be a whiney rock song - saddened, lonely and deserted by someone who didn't keep the promises made (let's face it...we all know someone like that!) Forgetting, letting go of this loser is probably is the wisest option...keep writing!