Will No One Hear Me?

I turned this one from a song into a poem...From my journal :)

I’m putting my heart on a piece of paper.

 Will no one hear me?

Along the road somewhere that paper was torn down the middle.

Now I’m torn and I’m lost.

 It’s like I’m blind and hanging from vines.

Someone’s pulling the strings of my life. And their pulling in all directions, tearing me apart.

 

Reviews

[Michael Lopez]

the more i read .... the more i like... guess theirs a first for everything...

[serpent]

another melancholic piece written with precision. guess sometimes, unintentionally though we end up letting others control our mind and occupy our heart....and i personally feel that once they get to realise that they can hurt you...they will...sooner or later... they definitely will!