The Best Friend

This is about a true relationship....And it SUCKS!!!

When your upset

You call me

When you need someone

I'm always there

There are no secrets

I'am your best friend

And you are mine

When you hold my hand

My heart stops

But I know it means nothing to you

Just a reflex

But still...

What could it hurt to pretend?

I hate that I'm so tyipical

Predictable

To do the expected

Nothing eats at me more

But

I smile because I'm your friend

I cry because that's all I'll ever be

Author's Note

He is the subject of so many of my writtings....Pity me...

Reviews

[Sarah Erickson]

This is lovely. Well, actually, it's rather sad, and it really strikes a chord with me, but I think you have written it very nicely. I love that you are so general about what you're writing; it gives the feel that you know that other people relate, or maybe that you want others to relate.
I only see a couple minor mistakes in the spelling and grammar department. I think it is structured really well, and there is a very natural flow to the entire piece.
I really don't have anything to criticize; it's really pretty, very human, and you seem to pour yourself completely into your writing.

[Brandon]

Nice job on this one. Sorry to hear as well.