Even If I Die, It's You

Even If I Die, It's You

A Poem by Hannie Angel
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Don't leave me. Don't leave me. You who are turning away, turn your feet toward me. I request and want you, you are everything in my life. Please carry me off on the dispersing light.

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In my cracked heart
Your cold sighs

Like a slowly withering flower
Fall onto my heart

This damn love, because of you
I can’t move even if I’m hurt
Even if I die, it’s only you

Without you, tears fill up my heart
It’s just black hell
To me, that’s who you are

Don’t leave me
Don’t leave me here
Turn the footsteps of your heart back to me
I really want you, I put my life on the line
Take me into the scattered light
To the end of the world

It’s gonna be you

It’s gonna be you

I can‘t let go

The key to my fate that I gave to the sky
It’s in my hands again

I swallow in a long sigh and burn up my soul
So I can have you

This damn love, because of you
I can’t quit even if I’m hurt
Even if I die, it’s only you

Without you, I have no blood or tears
I become a dangerous shadow
To me, that’s who you are

Don’t leave me
Don’t leave me here
Turn the footsteps of your heart back to me
I really want you, I put my life on the line
Take me into the scattered light
To the end of the world

It’s gonna be you

It’s gonna be you

I can‘t let go

I’ll sacrifice myself to protect you
I’ll do it obviously
I will make this crisis into an opportunity
You are my best decision, nothing can stop me
Take me into the scattered light
To the end of the world

It’s gonna be you

It’s gonna be you

I can‘t let go

© 2018 Hannie Angel


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You can feel the desperation in the poem. The repetition of phrases just adds to the melancholy.
great read

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like this one even more. I'm saving it, so I can re-read it later.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannie Angel

6 Years Ago

Thank you! ;) Also, for your other review. I'm working on a short story, and when I post it, I hope .. read more

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Added on April 7, 2018
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Tags: Romance, Emotional

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Hannie Angel
Hannie Angel

Changwon, Gyeongsangnam-do, South Korea



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So, I go to university as a double major in music and art, minoring in literature/writing, and I love to do all of those things! I like to make friends, but I have a lot of sad things to write about, .. more..

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