Couplet Sin

In the dark and ominous night he was created,

And it was in that night that his sins procreated.

Author's Note

Couplet contest

Reviews

[DustyCook54]

Sins cums in the evening,
comes blessing in the morning.

[Daytonight]

Great work for a couplet. Keep on penning.

[Thea]

What a very clever short piece of writing... :)))

[Megan]

Ah! I really wish there was more to this. I fee like it's the beginning of an amazing story. A story I REALLY want to read haha. Great job, this was attention grabbing and powerful. I hope you win! :) thanks for postin

[An owl on the moon]

Stark and stirring, you create a feeling of overwhelming night shades. It builds to a near scream.

[WritersSoul]

Omg I ca not top off the use of words like you do, they are used very wisely and beautifully :)