The Darkness Inside

The Darkness inside calls out to me

Begging for my blood to be shed

Crying out for my heart to stop

Demanding that the blade peirce my skin

 

The Darkness inside screams for release

Fighting for control of my thoughts

Tearing me apart from the inside

Breaking me down slowly and painfully

 

The Darkness inside will never be controlled

The Darkness inside will soon destroy who I am

The Darkness inside will tear apart everything I have

 

The Darkness inside is all of me...

Reviews

[Kelsey]

I really like this. I can really relate to it. I'm sorry you wrote something like this, though, because that leaves me to assume you deal with it. Stay strong, dear- things get better as you let them. x

[Suavis_Umbra]

wow , I really love it , dark and powerful but above else , true. We all have a ying or yang trying to come out and it's how we control that defines us. amazing poem , true philosophy XD XD

[Just_For_Me]

Thank you very much

[rnuff]

The Darkness inside will never be controlled
The Darkness inside will soon destroy who I am
The Darkness inside will tear apart everything I have

I really like this part, such an emotional read.

[Just_For_Me]

Thank you :) I was having a off day. But the best of poems come from bad days for me.