tears of seduction

tears of seduction

A Poem by kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused
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well this about someone saying to his/her ex "get over me im sorry i hurt you" basicly lol its a song to!!!

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tell me baby is this my time?
is this my life?,holding onto you the un loved?
i cant hold on, please try not to hold onto me

i loved you, but i wasnt in love with you


please dont cry those tears win me over everytime
so just let go and dont remeber me, not even in those sweet dreams
am sorry i tore your heart open and made it bleed

i know you wanted together forever
but nothing last's forever

 
i know you wont understand
but smile even though its a horrible lie

i loved you, but i wasnt in love with you
please dont crythose tears win me over everytime
so just let go and dont remeber me, not even in those sweet dreams
am sorry i tore your heart open and made it bleed

 

please dont tell me i'm wrong
this is my mind and my life
dont question it just live it
breathe in and never look back

 

tell me baby is this my time?
is this my life?,holding onto you the un loved?
i cant hold on, please try not to hold onto me

i loved you, but i wasnt in love with you
please dont cry those tears win me over everytime
so just let go and dont remeber me, not even in those sweet dreams
am sorry i tore your heart open and made it bleed 

© 2010 kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused


Author's Note

kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused
one of my songs x] please enjoy and let me know what you think this is one of my fav songs tbh :)

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its great, well done kirst

Posted 14 Years Ago


if you have the vocals u got yourself a deal hahahha

Posted 14 Years Ago


I can relate to the song... :D It's very very nice! And I really like the repetition of the lines... And my favorite part was..
'i loved you, but i wasnt in love with you
please dont cry..those tears win me over everytime'
And also ...
'Sorry I tore open your heart'
:D Signet

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ian
Wow I really like it... It's really good I love the way you combined and mixed the words together, specially in the chorus, I love the chorus, beautiful lines... Lots of emotion! Wonderful write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on December 2, 2009
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