killing myself slowly

about killing myself...

killing myslef slowly

seems fun to me

but pain to you

through my eyes a chance to run

your eyes just nothing, no fun

i want to be happy

be DEAD be FREE

but then you'll be sad and lonely

so i will kill myself slowly

with you not watching

Author's Note

i know its long or good sorry :(

Reviews

[AnA]

wow, great poem! short, tense. left me empty in a good way. Dramatic. great job!