you were everything

you were everything

A Poem by kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused
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about someone who had been left and kill themself

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heartbroken fears run through me
i have nothing left for me

not even today or tommorow
this is why i wished i never met you

saw you with those welcoming eyes 

why cant you see how much you hurt me?
why  cant you see how much you mean to me?
please just come back and you'll see
that were ment to be


screaming for your name

wishing for your dreamy voice

to save me,save me from this pain

i guess you'll never see how much you mean to me
i guess you'll never see how much you ment to me

© 2010 kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused


Author's Note

kirstey Lost,Crushed,Cold&Confused
i know it's not good sorry

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it's a good poem, don't down yourself!
I think its great because it was expressive as well as the fact that I think alot of people go through this so alot of people can relate to this. great job! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what do you mean it isn't that good its exceptional well much better than my writing. Mine isn't much at the norm though But keep up with your work of art

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 7, 2009
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