Killing me without you

well :/...i wrote when i broke up with my ex :/ so yeh :/

Why did you do this to me?

This pain is getting worse

Why did you leave me?

Baby I did what you wanted

Just tell me what I did wrong

I can re build this

Just give me another chance

I’ll prove to you, what you’ve done

What you’ve done is wrong

So take the knife and put it to my neck

Let the blood hit the floor and let me fall

I cant bare this pain that you left me with

These suicidal Thought’s are slowly controlling me

　

I cry till my eye’s bleed

I fall to the ground screaming for you

Please let me back into your arms

This lying smile will fade eventually

I feel nothing except the pain

When the knife pierces my skin

These mark’s will show

I will always love you

Till the bitter end

Author's Note

:/ crap me know :/

Reviews

[Lexi =]]

Great way of expressing your emotions. Its really good its sad but very well written.
Great Write[:

[SarahCortland]

This poem is scary but in a good way. It leaves me feeling scared. Thats really great it shows feeling! Lots and lots of it

[Signet]

Well, what can I say? It's a beautiful poem and it's full of emotions and pain that everyone experiences at one or the other point of their lives. I can relate to it totally and the best thing about the poem is that you've let your emotions take form of words into a beautiful piece. I love it.
Keep writing
Ankita