Falling for you

well its about this guy that i think im falling in love with (:

Is it okay that i think about you?

Is it okay that i day dream about you?

is it okay that i need you more everyday?

 

i think im falling for you

i fall for you more each day

your the one that makes me smile

i hold onto each day when were together

 

You say you dont love me

but you say that you want me

what one is it?

are playing me?

am i dreaming?

 

Are you mine or arent you mine?

my heart skips a beat when i see you

i think im falling in love with you

 

Author's Note

its crap i know xD

Reviews

[SarahCortland]

love it :) ive felt this wa before and i feel as if its something i can relate too. Its not crap i guess if you say taht about your writing your giving other people bad opinions at first before they get the chance to like it. I am guilty of this too lol even if you didnt mean it just thought id tell you. I really do like this poem again its very easy to relate to and it comes across as a thought more than actually saying so and i like it because it displays that emotion greatly!!! I give you a 100/100 on this most certainly :)

[Ian]

No it's not... ¬¬
These are your feelings... how can your feelings be "crap"??!!
Hehe xD I like it... Nice job!

[Wolf Moon]

It's great Kirst so shushy ^^