I just wanted to love you

My love is waiting to turn your tears to rose's.
All i ever wanted to be was part of your heart.
Just to wrap my arms around you.
And hold you in embrace.

You will never be alone.
I dont want to live without you next to me.
The ground crumbles when your not near me.

I wanna live for love.
I wanna give everything.
I'll try to find my place with you.
My beautiful love forever.

Im carrying your heart in mine.
May our love catch fire.
so it burns through me.
Baby i cant sleep without you next to me.

You drive my body and head.
Your the reason i breathe.
I love you.
More then you will ever know

Author's Note

This isnt very good

Reviews

[Ian]

Ok... I've notice you always write "not good", "isn't very good", "bad", "blah, blah"...
Stop doing that... be proud of your pieces... if you don't like them... keep working on them until you feel satisfied with the result... but never undervalue your own work... because you are only undervaluing yourself... please... just don't...
Every piece... that every person that calls itself a "writer" creates is good as long as he or she feels happy with it :) no matter what other people think or say... okay?

Ok... now... I really like it... very emotive... Nice job!

[SarahCortland]

I actually like it