The Kid In His Cathedral

This is about me. My first poem that I wanted to publish because this one holds a place in who I am

The Kid In His Cathedral

The kid in his cathedral alone he sat

In his cathedral he found refuge from stress

In his catherdral is were he took his shame and judgement to rest

 

In his cathedral he sat in anxious worry

Because the Kid in his cathedral knew he soon had to journey.

Author's Note

I am clearly an ameture so please do not be to harsh.

Reviews

[caesarkreshen]

I like your username.

It all lines up well, but I feel what is missing are parts that make an impression. Meaning, I don't feel I learn anything about you by reading this, which is what I kind of enjoy doing when reading.

Journey, stress, shame, judgment, worry... all of those things, what are they really, what is going through your mind when you chose those words?

[Kid]

Thank you for the input I really to apreciate it alot ty.The words I use that you stressed below.Mean what they do.The poem is about me finding a release, a refuge from all of those words in my poem in my room where I find bliss in my solitude which I use cathedral as an analogy.Because i find my solitude and relaxation is so important to me you could call it sacred,like how many people find cathedrals sacred,and the "sat in anxious worry for he knew he soon had to journey"is about comeing to the understanding and dread that i can't escape from
my troubles forever i will have to leave my solitude and face life again with all of its hurdles.For I know living in denial and running away from problems will never make me achieve happiness.Ty for your input though I do need to become better at getting my point across,but may I ask you poetry writers don't always explain thier pieces in detail because they want the viewer to get thier own meanign behind the poem that they can reflect upon them self?i honestly want to know another persons thoughts on this.So i can grow my own understanding about it.Ty

[Tori Jones]

I think this is a very beautiful poem! Great name too, I wish you luck in writing more poems....(I am also sort of new, I just started four days ago...so I know exactly how you feel...)

[Kid]

Ty for the support.I also wish you well.:)

[Tori Jones]

You're very welcome!

[Reader53]

this is pretty good. I like it.