Nicola

Unconditional love and a special bond between mother and child.

With chocolate Brown hair,
And navy blue eyes.
You came into this world,
With screams and cries.

You laid in my arms,
And I lowered my head.
Kissed your sweet smell,
As we laid on the bed.

My eldest of two,
So precious and sweet.
My tiny miracle,
I kneel at your feet.

A quarter of an hour,
To take your first breath.
I stared in awe,
As you fed from my breast.

Twenty five years,
And still you shine bright.
Making me proud,
And turning my darkness to light.

Nicola I love you,
So let it be told.
My beautiful daughter,
A sight to be-hold.

So i'll keep it brief,
Make it a bit shorter.
I love you my darling,
The bond between mother and daughter.

I love you Nicola xxx

Reviews

[Angelove]

This is beautiful, about a mother and daughter.

["writing by" KS]

Thank you :) x

[KAOlmsted]

My baby girl will be nine next month. I just got a tear in my eye. Really well done, this.

["writing by" KS]

Thank you very much... And as I said before, you were my inspiration.. remember for Laura.
So thank you again x
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Frieda P]

Affecting and poignant, there is eloquence in a mother's love....you've written it so beautifully here.

["writing by" KS]

Thank you Frieda I appreciate your feed back..
And again, unconditional mothers love.
X

[Frieda P]

I know it, you take the good, you take the not so great...it's all in there but it's still love with a capital L. My pleasure.

["writing by" KS]

:) x

[Jack Reaper]

beautifully done. sweet and sentimental. with all the horror stories you hear about with parents and children, its nice to see there are still some people who love and respect their kids. i am touched.

["writing by" KS]

Thank you and I agree with you whole heartedly ..I'm glad this touched you :) x

[The 13th Eros]

You words give your precious Nicola wings as only a mother's love can. This is achingly beautiful, tender, and filled with the love of the universe in your sweet bond.

["writing by" KS]

Thank you so very, very much.. she is precious at that.. :)

[B-poet]

Very sentimental, eloquent, and a perfect written theme relating to a mother paying homage to her daughter. Wonderful write. Great job. :)

["writing by" KS]

Thank you for your lovely comment.. :)

[The Nude Writer]

Awwwwe.. I might cry :')
Beautiful writing!

["writing by" KS]

Thank you Naked Writer. X

[Leigh]

Very sweet indeed

["writing by" KS]

Thanking you sweetly. X

[Casper Dumass Lecroix]

Damn good again, nothing sweeter than mothers and daughters who love each other

["writing by" KS]

Thank you. Ah ain't you sweet. ;)

[Angel of Heart's]

This reads like a sacred prayer from the soul......the words are so delicately whispered, and they move so deeply into the core of the heart... You have truly **hushed** me in these verses, lovely lady.....and I know that your daughter will cherish this gift of words from your heart to hers, always...:)

["writing by" KS]

Thank you so much Angel. your kind words have truely hushed me also... Nicola and Laura both loved their poems.. both cried. I must admit my eyes were also quite moist.
Thank you again for your lovely review. X