The Drink

my feelings on the drink

Oh, the drink, i love you so much

Why do you hurt me, when i touch?

Can't you be supportive and uplifting,

Or do you always come and go by drifting?

As you ease my mind and tingle my spine,

You cause some heartache that never leaves my mind.

Could i live without you, sure

But the pain i could not endure.

So i will drink, and drink 

And will continue to think, and think.

Maybe someday i will learn control,

But until then my life is yours.

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

A accurate look at the demonic reality that consumes many people. Well penned.

[Becky C Strukamp]

You nailed this one youngen. "The drink" a vicious vicious venomous charmer. Excelelnt poem. Loved it.

Keep up the great work!!!

[Richielee]

drink is a vicious circle and you portrayd it very well .Nice one King : )