Stay

Stay

K.S. 6/13/13

 

I don’t understand,

and I can’t believe,

damn I am naïve.

My mind is going crazy,

but I’m looking at me.

Living slow motion,

I’m not even competing,

for last position. 

My self-esteem is defective,

you have me in deficiency.

 

I walk around scared,

because you won’t be bothered,

By me anymore.

Yes it is true I am gullible,

Quickly I run to you,

Then I hit the floor.

You don’t want me to stay,

With you.  Not anymore.

 

Impossible to ignore,

Inevitably landing on my knees,

I am at your door.

Why do I keep letting you,

Treat me like your w***e?     
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Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

" I been cheated...been mistreated...but when will I be loved?" Sounds like that song to me.

[K.S.78]

Is that a good thing or a bad thing? Thanks for reading!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Respect yourself even if others fail to respect you. Hold your head high but maintain a humble spirit. Love yourself even if others let you down. Remember your own worth. Be honest with yourself even when others lie about you. Character is what you are. Reputation is only what others say about you. Learn to do these things for these reasons and the opinions of others become insignificant. Do the right thing for the right reason. I call that integrity.

[Traci]

Another honest write, so rich in emotion, full of pain, as you long for that special someone. To move forward is the only thing you can do to go on with your life and open for new chances of happiness.

[K.S.78]

all the stuff I write...(shhh...its a secret...same guy!) yep I know. Ugh! ;) Just so hard!

[Traci]

I know it's hard, but be thankful each poem wasn't about a different guy, haha. Seriously K, we all can relate to parts of each poem, and you write with such honesty, we feel your pain, which in turns brings about a real sense of understanding.