Pretty Baby

Pretty Baby

A Poem by K.S.78

Pretty Baby

K.S. 6/2013

 

I scream Youre all I need,

and believe me Im not that kind of girl.

Do you feel me on my knees,

or do you think Im pretending?

Well you are wrong, you were all along.

 

You hide your rawness so well,

but Ill show you how to feel.

Im writing these cold words,

falling deep, alone again in this bed.

The things you need and want and dont believe,

keep me naked, and without you.

 

You will make it through this rain.

I wont make it through the pain again.

This is the start of a brand new day.

This is the day I will surely go insane.

 

Now, my self-esteem is not the same.

Now, without you my body blames,

my mouth for letting you go away.

Now, far from me, I am far from grace.

 

I can remember my hands,

warm again as you play in my head.

 We are one I swear its got to be true.

 

I wonder where I stand at,

every night when you see the sunset.

Are you nostalgic?

 

Do you pass judgment as I stare,

at you begging with a hand of steel.

I have no time to argue.

No not today, your concern is tragic.

 

This is the day that stupid went crazy.

You were always so pretty baby.

 .


© 2013 K.S.78


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Featured Review

Again you have written with such honesty and raw emotion. Your pain bleeds into each word, allowing me to not only read, but feel. I think this is a piece that many can relate to on some level. As Elliott said, we are all a little insane from time to time, and when the longing for another is so strong, it brings that insanity to a whole new level. It's how we deal with those feelings...and that is writing is such a good therapeutic release.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.S.78

10 Years Ago

Thank you, ...I feel like shouting "Can someone please shut off my valve!" Lol I know I sound like .. read more
Traci

10 Years Ago

I think we all feel like shouting that from time to time. You never sound like a broken record, K. W.. read more



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Again you have written with such honesty and raw emotion. Your pain bleeds into each word, allowing me to not only read, but feel. I think this is a piece that many can relate to on some level. As Elliott said, we are all a little insane from time to time, and when the longing for another is so strong, it brings that insanity to a whole new level. It's how we deal with those feelings...and that is writing is such a good therapeutic release.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.S.78

10 Years Ago

Thank you, ...I feel like shouting "Can someone please shut off my valve!" Lol I know I sound like .. read more
Traci

10 Years Ago

I think we all feel like shouting that from time to time. You never sound like a broken record, K. W.. read more
We're all a little insane. I love this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.S.78

10 Years Ago

I'm madness but I am free... -Lana del Ray lol :) ty

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Added on June 20, 2013
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Tags: Love, relationships, heartache, poem, poetry, free verse, angst, breakup, writing, dating, meltdown


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