Fallen Angel

My fallen angel

Your face looks so torn

Don't dare cry

No not anymore

Your broken wings 

They're so beautiful even when worn

Pick up your soul darling

It's all over the floor

Stand up from your crouch

Shake off the ashes

You may never heal

Though you'll see and you'll feel

I'll hold your heart 

and WE will show them true evil

Author's Note

Ignore grammar, I'm not sure If this piece is completely done yet or not, so tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Ian Gilmour]

A cool take on the story of Lucifer, completed with style and compelling narrative. This is great and the ending is fitting and scary, in just the right way.

[Kaylee]

Thankyou!!

[Kate Henderson]

This is a very simple but effective write. Great flowing words that create fantastic poignancy. Well done! :)

[Kaylee]

Thank you so much!

[Kate Henderson]

You're welcome :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I think it is fantastic it has a flow all the way through good one...

[Kaylee]

thank you!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!