DAD

My dad was just an horrable person.before you ask,NO he didnt phisically do anything to me,Just emotionally(im just thankfull i have true friends to catch me.i love you guys.)

 Thanks for bringing me to hell.

You used to be my protecter, Now I stay away.

I used to adore & love you, But thats fadeing away.

   My high keepd the emotions inside,

 but only for a while.

My soul was dieing under that smile.

  I try not to think of you.

it's hard to say i still love you.

 Now these horrable scars up my arms remind me of you,yes YOU.

The pain is'nt fadeing away.

 Can't you just leave me alone?,

I WANT you to stay away.

  

 

Author's Note

I'm not a good speller xD And it kinda really sucks. im not a poet xDD its the best i can do xP Grrr.. i cant even call this poetry xC

Reviews

[nevermindfan1991]

This poem has promise, it was quite an interesting read, and you were able to convey your emotions well. It's structure just needed to be changed up a little bit. Also numerous spelling errors, like you said and also punctuation. But other than that, the poem was overall a good poem. Just needs a little tweaking.

[Blessed_Angel]

wow good emotion in this keep writing. it will be great if you reviewed one of mine..