As I write in vain

As the title says, this is all in vain

Now as I write
It's all in vain
Pour another drink
As i fall insane

I'll forget your name
Forget your smile
Forget my pain

I hope you're happy
I never realised that my words
Would fuel my pain

I won't forget the feeling
You left in my brain
A constant reminder
That I'm the problem

It's all in vain
I'll pour another drink
To try and dull the pain

My cause is futile
My life's a joke
One day I'll write the chords myself

This all means nothing
I softly spoke
But every day I've thought about that rope
You instilled hope
But laughed and joked
I made promise
That I might break
It's seems I've lost my mind

All in vain all in vain
All in vain all in vain
I'll hide inside this prison
I built my self

Reviews

[A.L.]

Oh come on Kaleb! To impress you must do better than this pattern. This has already been overused by everyone on this site. I dare you to write me something about how amazing you are. I want to feel intrigued.

[KalebX_]

You want positivity? I'm afraid you are in the wrong place but if positive is what you want 🤔

[A.L.]

I know. That's why I challenged you. It's something out of your comfort zone.

[KalebX_]

"A little birdie spoke to me"

[A.L.]

Haha you're a dork

[KalebX_]

The saddest, corniest dork you will ever meet :)

[A.L.]

I am a sucker for those ;)

[KalebX_]

Hmm I'll keep that in mind :p

[A.L.]

You sly thing...