Innocent Crush

Innocent Crush

A Poem by Brotha_Man_Dan

Here I sit Waiting,
Wondering, hesitating,
Should I say anything at all?

Or ask for you numBer,
So I can go home and Wonder,
If I should give you a call.

I look down Blushing,
Feel the heat rushing,
You caught me giving you a glance.

It's so irritating,
I keep contemplating,
Why Won't you give me a chance?

© 2009 Brotha_Man_Dan


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I like this so much you being shy an all, it's kinda sweet in a cute way.
The beginning of knowing the one you got googley eyes for is to.....say
something it's pretty hard sometimes though, and thats what I get from this
poem. You betta be looking around because a woman is probably thinking the
same thing about you.......

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is cute and well-written. I loved the subject and you told a great story through your poem. I liked the rhyme scheme and the flow of the poem. :)
You might want to watch out for random capitalization...there were some letters in the poem that I don't think were meant to be capitalized.
Nice job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really great.
It's a simple read, and many people can relate to it.
Keep up the good work.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 28, 2009

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West Chester, PA



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