Conclusion part one

A poem written in the end of my last year's poetry book

Make this be my final night
And  I shall be no more disguised.
I will become just rotten
and forever make me be forgotten.

Forgiven for them bad
continuous mistakes
And relieved by all
them bad soul aches.

I wish this to be my end
and may existence
with forgiveness blend...

Thus I leave being bitter
and I go to my grave
by sadness bitten...

Author's Note

please ignore any fault in my words. the poem is written because I felt sad while the past was moving on.

Reviews

[Ai thats life]

"I wish this to be my end
and may existence
with forgiveness blend..." Great phrase!

[Lupus Kaos]

thanks man.keep on reading to find more diamonds of my inner self!