Worlds Apart

Worlds Apart

A Poem by KaoticOrder
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As you fall away from the person you love

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It's strange how even when we're together
I feel like we're worlds apart
How the simplest things can make me smile
or they can break my heart

I remember the days
when we held each other near
It wasn't only your body
but your soul I could feel

The days when your eyes
looked right into me
But now they seem
to look right through me

When we kiss, it isn't tender
When we f**k, it doesn't feel love
When we touch, we don't feel
When we talk, it's not enough

I know it sounds harsh
But harsh words are usually true
And what hurts the most
Is that I know deep down I mean very little to you

© 2015 KaoticOrder


Author's Note

KaoticOrder
thoughts that have been going through my head for a long, long time

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While reading this it almost felt somewhat surreal. The last stanza created an almost parallel beauty between the 2nd and last line. When it all connected I was able to feel what you felt for a brief moment. I loved it! Thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago


KaoticOrder

5 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad it had such an impact for just a poem expressing my depressing feelings. haha.

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KaoticOrder
KaoticOrder

Essex, MD



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My name is Nerissa, but I go by Kaos on most writing sites. I am a twenty two year old aspiring writer and a stay at home Mother of a darling little angel named Sabrina. Began writing as dabbles an.. more..

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