Sleepover

A poem inspired by a sleepover i had at a friends house. It's about not letting anyone in.

You Ignored me,

and you bored me,

but I didn't want to core me.

You were jealous,

so was I,

but neither you nor I will core me.

I am callous.

I am hidden.

We were both a little smitten,

but you still don't seem to know me.

You can't core me.

You can't see me.

I am hidden.

So are you.

Reviews

[UpComesDown]

I'M SORRRRRY! jk... this is really good i like it

[Laura E. Aranda]

such imagery when you use the word core
interesting......
cheers
and welcome here
lea

[jumbie's #1 fan]

awesome micah. i really like this. the rhymes are cool

[Elizabeth]

"I am callous.

I am hidden.

We were both a little smitten"

Love the word play, here.

[!!..Love..!!]

I liked it, your choice of words are just brilliant!