Simply, I Love You

Simply, I Love You

A Poem by KarMarBar
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A short, but sweet poem for my fiance...

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Just sitting at my computer,
alone in the studio apartment
we share our lives in,
and I think about you.

So I'll try to write a poem
that can express my love for you.
But there would never be enough words
to describe my appreciation for you.

I'll try to tell you how much I love you,
how I cannot believe we've been through so much.
I can thank you for saving my life.
I can thank you for being that crutch.

I can tell you much I appreciate
how I never have to worry about you,
about how I know you will be faithful no matter the circumstance,
I can let you know the same is true about me in regards to you.

I can try to make some more words rhyme
to convey how I feel inside
But words can only say about us...
soul mates - it'll be worth the ride.

© 2015 KarMarBar


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I think you said it perfectly. How we truly feel is so hard to put into words, it always seems that when we finish writing there is still something missing. We search long and hard for those perfect words that will express exactly what we are feeling in our herats. But, "Simply, I love you" is all of them wrapped up in a wonderful little four word package that says everything. Great writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work! I greatly appreciate your feedback.



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I think you said it perfectly. How we truly feel is so hard to put into words, it always seems that when we finish writing there is still something missing. We search long and hard for those perfect words that will express exactly what we are feeling in our herats. But, "Simply, I love you" is all of them wrapped up in a wonderful little four word package that says everything. Great writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work! I greatly appreciate your feedback.
Very beautiful, I think it is hard at times to tell someone all that we love, but I find my hands can speak for my heart, where my tongue often falters.

Posted 5 Years Ago


AHH! The beginning literally made me cry. This is beyond beautiful!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

5 Years Ago

Aww, thank you! :)
Heart - behold keyboard - fingers type keyboard - heart appears on screen.
Class !

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem. Wonderful dedication...i love the emotion

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
annalysiar

5 Years Ago

You're welcome😃
makes me wish that I had that. lovely poetry. simply put and straight to the point.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

5 Years Ago

Thank you. You won't find it, but I promise it will find you! :)
I agree.
"But words can only say about us...
soul mates - it'll be worth the ride."
Words are cool but Life together make the love grow to new heights and places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

5 Years Ago

I appreciate your kind words. Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
just a hug and a tender kiss ! loved your words of love !

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KarMarBar

5 Years Ago

That's all. :) Thank you!

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Added on November 27, 2015
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Tags: love, appreciation, grateful, soulmate

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KarMarBar
KarMarBar

West Haven, CT



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I am new to this website so I have to figure my way around a bit, so please bare with me. A little about me... I have always considered myself better with the written word than the spoken word. I have.. more..

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