Unfaithful

Unfaithful

A Poem by Kara
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*edited*

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Everything you said to me,
How could I have taken you so seriously?
Your fingers were drenched with betrayal,
as you ran them through my hair.
You whispered your sweet, phony scripts
with her scent lingering on your lips.

You felt the scars as you ran your
hand up my arm,
You said you would heal me,
-Keep me from harm
When, in the end, all you could manage
-was causing more damage.

I've never witnessed a heart so black
I want the time I wasted back.
All the words you spoke were fruitless
All the love I gave was useless

I convinced myself there'd be no more tricks
I wanted to believe the words
"I love you" 
that escaped from your tainted lips

Excalibur wedged between my ribs
unwavering in my heart now cast of stone
Why didn't you just desert?
Your rejection would have been a mere splinter
to the pain of being treated as dirt.

© 2012 Kara


Author's Note

Kara
A little Freestyle poem I wrote awhile ago.
Thoughts?

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It was awesome! Kinda sad though... :( I'm glad I get to see you smile and make you happy unlike your past bf's. I particularly liked the lines: "Your fingers drenched with betrayal, as you ran them through my hair." It'd be nice to see more lines like that. The contrast part sounded awkward. Any ways, great imagery, it sounds like you were with a real t**d of a boyfriend.

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very good, as slugger put it, awesome!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was awesome! Kinda sad though... :( I'm glad I get to see you smile and make you happy unlike your past bf's. I particularly liked the lines: "Your fingers drenched with betrayal, as you ran them through my hair." It'd be nice to see more lines like that. The contrast part sounded awkward. Any ways, great imagery, it sounds like you were with a real t**d of a boyfriend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 29, 2012
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Tags: Excalibur, cheating, boyfriend, damage, betrayal, phony, scars, personal, old, heart, black, love, tainted, pain, unfaithful

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Kara
Kara

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