Can't You See What You Done To Me?

I have no future
I have no soul
My soul has been taken by the darkness
that you left behind
I will no longer be the same
I'm no longer sane
What have you gain?
Just my p***y and my heart
Which you devoured with your mouth
was it tasty was it good?
What if I did the same
strap you down and tied up
my p***y lips on your lips
just a little tease a little taste
then when you least expected
your blood I will taste
As I lay on top of no time to waste
I cut you up across your waist
then I lash across your face
gouse your eyes
now you cant see your lies
now its time for you die
This what the darkness has done to me
I hope you liked it
thats what you did to me when you left me

Reviews

[DavidRyan]

Holy god. Where to begin? Well, it was brilliantly written. Maybe a little editing can be done but not in the subject matter, more in how much you let the reader in and how much you make them come up with on their own. Definitely dark. And, at the same time, a story of redemption. I like it a lot. Thanks for sending this my way

[larryb]

Yikes remind me to never f**k with you lol

[solo2be]

Very dark, but very expressive of the pain that was cause. And you really letpeople see your pain. Great write

[Kelley]

I think some one was pissed off.....lol
Great write Karen! Some people can can just make you want to cut their heart out and
make them eat it........Right?
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[An owl on the moon]

So darkly moving and powerful... The pain others inflict on us... The scars left behind... Your pain is so vivid in this work...