Serial Killers Lullaby

You kill me 

You watch my body still 

You smile wickedly 

And kick me consistently 

Until you get bored 

And decide you can't afford 

To get caught 

With my body you fight 

In the darkest night 

You dig a hole 

And into it you let me fall 

Your work is done 

Killer on the run

Reviews

[Lasune]

This poem is very good I especially love the sense of unease it gave me.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Very good... very twisted. I suggest your mind is "tuned" to the dark, lower frequencies. Do you go there by choice or did you just wake up in "the dark?" Although Poe, Lovecraft and others are considered "dark" and/or "gothic" the writer is every bit as intriguing as their work. So, I will persist until I have a sense of the darkling in you. Hope you don't mind. :)

100 wicked kicks

[Kate Henderson]

Hey, thank you for your review, glad you enjoyed it. I find I can write better when I look into the darkside of humanity...I wouldn't be able to write cute fluffy things about puppies and kittens. Writers like Poe and Lovecraft look a bit deeper into the darkness and not just 'gothic' for gothic sake. That's the type of writing I enjoy. I suppose it's just twisted reality. Thanks again.