Simplicity

Listen,

Take a bite,

Stare at the beauty,

And an idea comes to light.

The wonderful simplicity of

Music,

A muffin,

And a rainy day in May.

Reviews

[Rahul]

IInd stanza's perfect, lovely write100/100

[Magdelena]

I also write free-style. And this was fantastic.. Great images inside.. How simple you brought forth your words and each held such a great meaning.. Keep that pen flowing me gal! it is mighty..

~Mags~

[Katie Marie]

Thank you :)

[Criss ;)]

wow, what a great write.......i liked this piece much, you've dropped here your enough efforts to make this piece, i can say, i can figure out.
i loved this

The wonderful simplicity of
Music,
A muffin,
And a rainy day in May....

nice line, well, it's now the month of MAY still......lol, and i can feel, i can imagine what you wanna say, what you wanna convey through your this beautiful piece.....nice write

have a nice writin'
have this 94.9 / 100 :)

take care.......~~

[patricia]

A proustian glimpse into all that can be found in a moment. Told in an unusual and entertaining way. Enjoyed.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautifully penned. Simple and yet rings of a million truths. I don't know why, but seeing the muffin made me smile.. perhaps because it is one of my favorite breakfast foods. Lovely!

[Layla J Omorose]

loved this. simple and tranquil there is a sense of peace that flows through this poem. good work