Battles Lost

Battles Lost

A Poem by Phoenix Alleena

Battles Lost

 

Fate is Fate, you can’t change it

Despite all odds to over come;

When losing is the destiny chosen,

You can’t fight it.

 

If it were any other

Chances could be better

Maybe they wouldn’t be…

I can’t fight it.

 

She thinks of him fondly

Endearing thoughts prevail

A gleaming adoration there

She can’t fight it.

 

So who’s to blame?

This vicious or wonderful cycle

Of Winning or Losing…

We can’t fight it.

 

Because she means much to me

Though he also stays close

I’ll walk a separate path, happily

No one can fight it.

 

This is my own choice

Part of my predetermined fate

Through all these battles lost,

I will fight it.

© 2008 Phoenix Alleena


Author's Note

Phoenix Alleena
Just a little something, a resolution
to a problem I had for a few mere hours.

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Beautiful and deep.

Have faith in yourself, Katie. As powerful as the Currents of Fate can be, ultimately we all have choices that can determine our Destiny (I know Fate and Destiny are synonyms, but I'm using Fate meaning predetermined choices, and Destiny as the goal). :) Situations change, and even at the threshold of misery there is a chance for Joy. Never give up your choices and you freedom.

Great write! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful and deep.

Have faith in yourself, Katie. As powerful as the Currents of Fate can be, ultimately we all have choices that can determine our Destiny (I know Fate and Destiny are synonyms, but I'm using Fate meaning predetermined choices, and Destiny as the goal). :) Situations change, and even at the threshold of misery there is a chance for Joy. Never give up your choices and you freedom.

Great write! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm..........now you know I'm going to want to know who these two people are........especially the young man that has caught your eye!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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