Just because I'm angry.

You make it sound like I did it all.
Like I was the reason for every f*****g downfall.
You seem to forget that you cheated and hurt me.
How everything was about how you wanted to feel free.
How you made up sickening lies to hurt and make me love you.
You didn't care how many times the blades had to pass through.
Did you find it funny to see me cry?
How does it feel, knowing your no longer that guy.
Who makes me smile, sing and dance.
You missed your chance for our romance.
You made your point, your hurt I get it.
But stop changing my words for your own benefit.

Author's Note

Happy James?

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

perhaps instead of writing poems to eachother, maybe you should actually talk about these things. fighting on writerscafe isn't going to profit anyone but the site and those of us who have to read these brilliant descriptions of betrayal.

in referance to the poem however, this is incredible, though the rhyme seems out of place in something so angry. the second "your" in the second to last line should be "you're" and 'how does it feel, knowing you're no longer that guy." is a question and should be punctuated as such.

[Silver_Anime]

this is very interesting :) theres a lot of anger in this poem n i can tell how ur feeling from what's shown in here. very nice ^_^

[fernii]

Hmmm interesting :)

[Michael.]

Well, it was angry.

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

wait....
OH I GET IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh..wow...

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Well.... there is a lot i want to say but i'm not going to....