Equinox

Celestial Path

Day and night tantamount for

I am equinox

Author's Note

Not sure if I got it right, if this is a Haiku or not :P

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Your count is off but who gives a ff, this is spectacular! ;-)

[KeeD]

xD I'm going to edit it, thanks for the feed back I now understand it :P I think :P

[Lost in Wonderland]

i like the poem:) simple and lovely:) though for a haiku the syllable count is a tad off

[KeeD]

17 syllables right :D, sh!t did I get more in @_@ haha sorry >

[Lost in Wonderland]

oh haha it wasnt that just the order, 5 7 5. Haikus are odd to get the hang of in my opinion:P but I liked your theme:)

[Lost in Wonderland]

and its okay, i didnt mean to sound nit picky haha:P

[KeeD]

xD haha no i'm glad you pointed it out so I can learn something haha :P everyday I learn something new to improve my writing, its pretty cool, < 3 thank you :3 xoxo. I shall try again soon xD :P

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha anytime, and shoot me a message when you do:)

[KeeD]

I think I fixed it, is it correct now ?: D

[Lost in Wonderland]

it is :D yay!

[Tasha]

Its beautiful.