I Scream, I Love, I Write.

I Scream, I Love, I Write.

A Poem by KeeD

My tongue dances behind my lips
To taste your candy coated kiss
sugar drops of heaven 
as my eyes sin with every glimpse
Sweet the sound of your playful laugh
the cheer that consumes my heart
Steering wheel to my soul
Your texture makes my mind lose control 
Cover my heart with melted chocolate 
Taste the caramel peel it's coated with
Red cherries waiting to be picked
Sitting on your chest that's aching to be licked
Gobble you up for premier satisfaction
You and I share a fatal attraction
So fill me up with your kindness
Show me what the good life is
Treat me 
Like
I would 
Treat you
My delicious love

© 2013 KeeD


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this is a really colorful piece...i like the pull of it...would have liked the "steering wheel" car metaphor to progress with the candy one---that one line seems to not quite fit.

but otherwise...this is quite digestible.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago



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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..

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