Phasing Crystals

With every tick
There comes a tock
Another round
Lost with the clock

A sudden jolt
Dug from the past
An Internal rhapsody
Which does not last

A fray gone few
Position none
How can you feel
When you are no one?

Night and day
No life to cry
Heart ticking slow
You say goodbye.

Choices made
You live on alone
Disaster in veins
Frozen in bones.

Halted forward
Exaggerated mean
You don't know you
And you don't know me.

I come to help
You've lived to kill
No solid shelter
You do not feel.

There goes the day
Slow sets the sun
Gone with the moon
Sounded with your gun.

Time doesn't tick
It does not tock
Runaway with your life
And do not stop.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

I like the starting how you started with "time does tick-tock" and the ending "time doesn`t tick-tock" .. here you`ve circled the loop of a life with your words and to be honest, I adore this beautiful write. It was a fun to read this poem because it`s rhyme, deep thoughts of life, flow of creation, peace and the great outline .. Excellent! Great job! ;)

[Kelly Danielle Hall]

Thank you!