The Sun through green is a spark through hope. A bending
wind through trees is a sad cello bowing across a heart alone.
A turning and forming flight of small iridescent birds
across the setting sun finds itself in the shapes and forms of the music of the
spheres. Come to rest in a single heart, content.
A lonely voice singing uncaring in the wildness of a dark
speck hunting high. I cry all for you in such music.
The dreams of an ancient tree leaning into its final season.
Its slow world ending in vast epoch memory.
Song born blossom casting around your hair blowing in the
wind of a sudden summer storm.
The mathematical percussion of rain on the driest ground
thirsting. The beat of a single wing.
A curve of a pearled shell, a brief touch of skin allowed.
One word, to catch the dark water of a mountain falling. The
tear of a child.
The glancing grace of a lover. You speaking.
Warmth in an eye
looking.
The riding of a chestnut mare over the rolling downs of your
land.
Your breast rising and falling with the breath of me. A note
rising in perfect pitch.
A strata of the deepest history found illuminating an old
world consumed with dark arias.
The perfection of limbs entwined. The mathematics of a
caress, brief and yielding.
A perfect reflection of trees. The song of an old man loved.
A secret manuscript, ancient songs on aged and yellowed
parchment.
An insect and a perfect flower.
A covering of white linen.
The vibration of the world and its harmony in coloured
composition.
Friends talking and your lovers kiss into a night of dreams.
Writing my words and your body glistening under my hand.
Musica Univesalis is the Music of the Spheres. The inaudible music of Pythagorean mathematics.
The photograph is mine and part of a series called The Mathematics of Shape.
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and now, you have me considering the fractal geometry of lovemaking. The physical arc of horseback riding (bareback of course) as the stallion gallops with my thighs wrapped around him; the comparison to the undulating motion when I last rode a lover in mid-afternoon abandon. Lovely, lovely images; breathtaking coursing. This poem, to me, moves in breaks and starts- its motion is not contained, but rather it takes breaks, pauses to wipe a strand of hair from a lover's eye, caress their face, before rocking them again onto another cresting wave and holding them while they tremble. Sublime.
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10 Years Ago
Do you ride Marie?. I'm glad you enjoy this. I lost my mare two years ago but I am now training her .. read moreDo you ride Marie?. I'm glad you enjoy this. I lost my mare two years ago but I am now training her son.
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I do ride. I have a brief story to share. When we were 12 years old, we were asked to picture our fu.. read moreI do ride. I have a brief story to share. When we were 12 years old, we were asked to picture our future, and draw it. I was an unusual child- I drew myself living in a cabin on top of a mountain, working as a veterinarian and riding my horse to work. Flash forward to age 28, as a Peace Corps volunteer in rural Guatemla- living 11,000' on top of a mountain, in a small 12x20' adobe hut, working as a field vet, and riding my little bay stallion to work. :-) How many people ever do that? Alas as he recovered his strength under my care, he became feisty and I had to geld him. I bring that story out on blind dates that go bad, in order to ensure that I never hear from the gent again...
That legacy you have must be amazing, Ken.
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So you have told me that so I will bother you no more? I see, I get the picture, in the words of the.. read moreSo you have told me that so I will bother you no more? I see, I get the picture, in the words of the immortal John Cleese. Smirk.
did not know you were making me an offer, my friend? In that case, retract the story, unhear it, and.. read moredid not know you were making me an offer, my friend? In that case, retract the story, unhear it, and make me an offer a gal cannot refuse. ;-)
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Ah tempting Marie but I'm afraid I'm spoken for. In the words of the immortal Groucho; Those are my .. read moreAh tempting Marie but I'm afraid I'm spoken for. In the words of the immortal Groucho; Those are my principles I'm afraid. If you don't like them, well I have others.
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No worries- I can handle the distance thing but England to Central America might be just a tad exces.. read moreNo worries- I can handle the distance thing but England to Central America might be just a tad excessive anyway. She is a lucky lady to have you, though. My possibilities seem to be limited to the married male taxi driver population of a large Guatemalan city. One day, I will write a poem about Latinos- I am convinced, after 12 years of working with/ for them, that they warrant their own genus and species.
A gentle funneling of exquisite images, observations, that the poet then let coalesce, onto the body of a lover where then she breathed life into those words; music. This is more than clever, it's a complete immersion of beautiful things ––– into the most beautiful thing, the poet cherishes.
this is soul precious Ken, a cello sonata resonates and echoes, a heart song of exquisite beauty, the quiet that alchemizes memory and music into the soft gold of 'content'...ahh
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10 Years Ago
You are one of the reasons I keep thinking I am doing something right Ed.
I feel like I just walked into a Poetic Art Museum. I walk the corridors admiring each of your lines as they hang on the wall in beautiful guilded frames and become more amazed the farther I go. Each line in this poem is a beautiful painting on its own, but put them all together and you have a masterpiece. Very cool imaging Ken.
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Now that I like. I've said before that I've often wished for a universal art that I could place all .. read moreNow that I like. I've said before that I've often wished for a universal art that I could place all my pieces into both written and visual. I think you've cracked it here Jack. Thank you.
The image expression is as good as I have seen from you, Ken. Your eye to ink translation is brilliant, transporting. In some ways, personally, I think you detract from the impact of this excellent, enwrapping phrasing by your layout style - which I have come to recognise as part of your poetic identity. Occasionally, for my taste, without any word changes, I would have liked to see line breaks on some of the longer lines, which I feel might perpetuate and hold the music, but I understand this is entirely subjective. In any case, this piece is superb, mate. P.
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10 Years Ago
It was something I was trying Pete. Leastways thats my story and I'm sticking to it. I too don't rea.. read moreIt was something I was trying Pete. Leastways thats my story and I'm sticking to it. I too don't really know if it works or not. I think I will leave it for a while to see if it grows on me. Watch for any changes.
Again you are simply too kind to me Pete and for that I humbly thank you.
'I should not talk so much about myself if there were anybody else whom I knew as well. Unfortunately, I am confined to this theme by the narrowness of my experience'
Thoreau.
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