Peter Pan

Let's runaway to neverland. Where all our dreams come true.
You Peter and I tink too. We could go to mermaid lagoon, and
Stay there and bask in the afternoon. When the sun isn't burning
Too bright, the Indian camps a myth, one I'm dying to prove true.
But Peter please stay with, and not run off like you do. Maybe
Hang mans tree will bring you back to me. Because you belong
Here with me. And I in you, have trust. Canibal cove seems so
Horrible, maybe it's where our nightmares lay. Because everything's
So lurid, in this neverland gone astray. You're my Peter Pan who had
Adventures on skull rock. Until you took her hand and left me with
The sound of a ticking clock...

Reviews

[Medow Portillo-Kelly]

I thought it was awesome!

[Alex Cook]

I would love to add this to my web site. Look at it and if you want I will post it there. Thanks.
http://alexdeancook.wix.com/cooksworld-sci-fi

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this version of the Peter Pan story. More interesting and made me want to know more. You create dangerous places and a opening for more tale. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[GeekyGamer128]

Good poem. I really love Peter Pan and you wrote this great poem about it.

[Alex Cook]

Excellent. You must have watched that movie as many times as me. Loved it.

[Eddy Jones]

This is the first work I am reviewing on here and I really enjoyed your poem and now look forward to many more by you.

[Not here]

i like this poem just as much as the other one you wrote :) keep it up