I'm so haunted

I'm so haunted

A Poem by Kerri[pollutes]
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Hard times drag on.

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I’m so haunted

barbwire on the heart

knifes in your mouth

and if I saw myself on the street I wouldn’t give her a second glance

no one does

my veins are all caught up in tangles

the song I listen to over and over

is the only thing keeping my blood pumping

keeping my fingers typing words

I’m so haunted

you break my spirit

its shatters and and seeps out through my ribs

carrying broken pieces of my heart

landing hard on the cold floor

of you

tangled in ghosts of what you used to be

I’m so haunted

 

© 2008 Kerri[pollutes]


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Kerri[pollutes]
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wait!
wait!
ok...
1- diction.... lovely.
2- structure... really not bad.
3- emotions... morbid.
4- description... very strong.
...
result: i love it!

and i've never used this language... i'm usually... so... dont know!
but proper with my English!

anyway... i really enjoyed this piece!
really!

keep it up!

Posted 16 Years Ago


erm...
aauuu...
no words!

Posted 16 Years Ago


this gave me chills. oh my goodness. this is basically the definition of what it feels like to fall apart. i really hope you stay together though. good write, but i hope things get better.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 15, 2008

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