Me ( Written April 18 2007)

Year has passed since my First big one!

Yo! What up.What it do?
Those are the questions that are asked to you
 U are a calm cool collected individual without the concern to talk
At most ur a loner. u can see it when u walk
Not to talkative unless ur in Geometry and English
Trying to find your meaning saying"I just dont kno what that thing is"
Goin through the hall way listening to music
Thinkin some people have brains but dont kno how to use it
Reflecting on the day's passing
Thinking of so many questions without asking
Watching those u care for not care for u
Yup. Thats your average day of skool
Honestly u have boring life, not much to live for
Ok. Family and friends but nothing more
Wondering what people think of you
But not caring what they say or do
Taking chance on the love and whatever the outcome
U glad it was done
What do u think of this guy's life?,be honest
Avoiding confrontation like nobody wants it
Sometimes not having the testicular fortitude
To do things out of is Character that might sound rude
Thinking about doing homework while Tv is on, your torn
Cant turn on your mind,Cant get that blinking light bulb on
Who is this guy that I'm describing
Someone who's of greatness, someone who's done of trying
Based on the title u know who it be?
Simply me

K.E.V.O.N  C.R.U.T.E
Keeping thoughts bottled up,in your mind their stuck
Everyday u feel out of luck
Verifying your true meaning
Only to find  out u may be worth needing
Nothing in life is more important than succeeding

Creating possible futuristic scenarios
Reading something fascinating, not knowing where your mind will go
Understanding the meaning of pain
Telling yourself it's ok when someone you know doesn't kno your name
Everyday u b u

Every day u stay true
Why am I using u not me or I
I'm a poet, I'm a "different" kinda guy

Well thats all i have to say...thats all i need to say
Taking on life as it comes my way

If u enjoyed this thanks. i really mean it
If not.. I'm still glad you've seen this



P.S.
Comment This
That is all i wish

Author's Note

Speak what u feel

Reviews

[K C Scott]

It really takes a special talent to examine yourself from the outside the way you have, and this peice is nothing short of amazing. What I enjoyed the most was not only the flow which seems to come so naturally, but your choice of rhymes. You find a way to rhyme words that one would ordinarily not associate with the other.
Another great write!
Keep it up
:)

[EvesDaughter]

Kevon- you are a master with your pen.
I feel strength in this write, an inner
strength, and it passes over...yes, it
does pass over to the reader (me).

Words are just words, but once they
are infused with the writer's soul...
they can change the world ;)

[Wildfleour]

I take it that this is to have the beat and rhythm of hip hop (or am I just a silly white woman....smile).

I liked it. Honestly. I like the idea of staying true to oneself.