She is the dark II

She is the dark

Where I can’t see ahead

Where I lay awake in bed

Unknown is my fate

And in the dark I suffocate

 

She is the dark

And a night that I can’t curse

Where hidden is the face

A stranger whom I yearn

Sweet suffering, sweet pain

 

She is the dark

Where I can rule the night

To be her white knight

Sheathed is the sword

And a story to be told

 

She is the dark

And it’s not just a line

And aches the heart of mine

And dark is her dismay

As I slowly fade away

 

She is the dark

Where no need to wear a mask

Where none dares to ask

And I hide behind a wall

To un-break the heart of coal

 

She is the dark

And dark became my heart

As darkness has no end

Darkness has no start

Until the lights descend

 

She is the dark

The cold and innocence

And I’m just a spark

A truth I can’t confess

That she is the dark

Author's Note

Still having a writer's block ... but couldn't hold this one in !!
She is the dark (1)
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Kilani/608191/

Reviews

[Don Shaw]

Great work

[M.Kilani]

Thank you

[Aline S. Iniestra]

Darkness invading a white knight. That's enchanting, besides all the darkness displayed in every situation and result. Very nice!!! :)

[Ruth]

This has suspense until the end :)
Wonderfully written love, the dark can be just as alluring as the light at times
xx

[Bethany]

This is a terrific poem, great use of rhythm to make it flow so easily!

[Bard Constantine]

Nicely done examining the mystery of woman. May they continue to mystify and amaze us forever more.... *tips glass*

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Woman are like wine. You never know what you will get till you open the bottle. I like the story in the poem. Woman can make us stronger or bring us to their level. I like the movement and the description in your words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[YouoweYoupay]

I think you meant to say; innocent, in the last few lines, I love this passionate portrayal of the darkness, i enjoyed the rhymes in the stanzas as well, an inspiring, emotionl combination of Dark and Dreamy, well done, get over your writersblock soon, its not pleasant at ALL =/ , salam.

-Wella.