Silence

Out of words I am

In silence I utter nothing

All is there and nothing is missing

Stripped of all my swords I am

 

All words are lost

All fall to echo of a breath

All on surface yet in depth

Blowing off the dust

 

While in mind questions roam

I dare not to ask

Clear is the mask

Until I reach home

 

Worries not doubts

All there like April stars

One day clear on behind cloud

And one hid in dust

 

And you I can trust

But you’re not ready to tell

As I can see the will

But silence is a must

 

And all submit to silence

All are gone once I see your face

As I count all this grace

I dare not to ask … silence

Author's Note

Reviews are welcomed.

Reviews

[Nyida Strong]

Sometimes the most simple words can say the most profound things. In silence there can be screaming.

N. Strong

[maxin james]

Yeah, its quite nice read! Keep it up, simple words and powerful use.

[A.r. Bazian]

ok... its deep man, and emotional!

its not the best you've written!

[Lowesy]

there is a slight inconsistency with both the rhyme and structure, you seem to throw in rhymes whenever you can for instance, sometimes they are the 2nd and 3rd lines of a stanza and sometimes they are 1st and 2nd, etc. Also, the 2nd stanza down, 3 of your lines begin with 'All', if that is to be a pattern I'd consider repeating it somewhere else

[MOON]

Beautifully rhytmic piece . Silence is Golden.

[Coyote Poetry]

'As I can see the will
But silence is a must'
I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. I do believe more can be fixed by silence then loud words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[olla]

I had to read this twice.. it is very good..

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I can really appreciate the subtle nuance of this. Silence is golden.