Goal in Life

Goal in Life

A Poem by BlakHeart

Being on top is not the goal of winning
Being at the bottom is not the sign of failure
Their are people at the top
But some of them are not

Our world is round
It has its own ups and downs
Sharp curves and bumps
But winning was never the goal

© 2016 BlakHeart


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A succinct honest portrait of how we humans make wins and losses in some linear game of life, when we live on a planet that really is round- and its nature doesn't count successes and failures at all. I like the contrast! Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


BlakHeart

7 Years Ago

thank you very much :)
I love it and I think that just doing right should always be the goal.

Posted 7 Years Ago


BlakHeart

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on June 24, 2016
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BlakHeart
BlakHeart

manila , NCR, Philippines



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Love to read poems and create poems from personal or other experiences. Also love to read novels more..

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