Bestfriend

To my best friend who I love the most

In all the people in the world
Why must it be you?

So many people to love
Why does it have to be you?

I wanted you to be mine
But that can never be true

For you are my bestfriend
And that is all what it is

Reviews

[Emily]

So true for so many people!
Keep it up!

[BlakHeart]

thank you very much :)

[zunie frost]

True words. A bestfriend is all what i love

[BlakHeart]

thank you very much :)

[Elmarie]

Hi There

It's hard falling for a bestie. It does make it hard. It is true that there are billions of people but sometimes we fall for someone that sees us differently. Lovely poem.

Blessings

El

[BlakHeart]

Thank you so much :)

[GalaxyGhost]

I love the message of this poem! It's interesting and has a good format that I like.

[BlakHeart]

Thank you :)

[iamshadowine]

short and precise! nice write!
keep writing :D

[BlakHeart]

Thank you :)

[Tessa Melendez]

A good poem with a good amount of expression. Short and sweet. A good tribute to a friend. Nice job. =)

[BlakHeart]

Thank you :)

[Teja]

Nice poem with heartfelt emotions. A good tribute to your friend. Good work.

[BlakHeart]

Thank you :)

[Zaliodir]

Nice job, this is a very expressive poem. Its a little generic, but I can see it is very heartfelt. Just two grammatical errors. "Of all the people in the world" would be more correct, and "And that is all it is" or "And that is all we have" would be more grammatically correct. No need to have "what" in there, its just an extra word. Well done overall keep it up! =)

[BlakHeart]

Thank you very much :)