blooming wildflawer

BLOOMING WILD FLOWER

I BEG YOU PLEASE!!!

TELL ME,WHY DO PEOPLE FIGHT AND HURT EACH OTHER?

VALINTLY BLOOMING FLOWER.

WHAT CAN YOU SEE FROM YOUR FEILDS.

WHY CAN'T PEOPLE FORGIVE EACH OTHER?

THE RAIN PASSES AND THE SUMMER TOOK ON BLUE HUES.

ALL ALONE NOW, YOU TREMBLED BEFORE ME

WITHOUT SAYING A WORD, WHEN YOUR FRIENDS WILT AROUND YOU

WHAT DO YOU THINK? WITH YOUR LEAVES UNABLE TO SPEAK HOW DO YOU CONVEY LOVE.

SUMMERS SUN CLOUDED OVER, THE WIND STREAMED BY THE TOW OVERLAPED.

THERE IS NO PROOF THAT YOU ONCE LIVED. FOR THAT IS THE FATE OF THOSE WICH HAVE NO NAME.

Reviews

[Daisy]

wonderful poem..... well i guess because people have lost trust and hope in man kind, in himself and has became selfish in order to live.....
such nice words and wonderful concept..... great job

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poetry that asked questions.
"VALINTLY BLOOMING FLOWER.
WHAT CAN YOU SEE FROM YOUR FEILDS.
WHY CAN'T PEOPLE FORGIVE EACH OTHER?"
Forgiveness, concern and kindness. Three things we need in this world. Not more soldiers, weapons and threats. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote