Keeping strong

If I pour out all my feelings will you care?

If I cry will you wipe away the tears?

If I am alone will you comfort me?

If I run out of words will you speak for me? 

If I fall will you catch me? 

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yeah, I agree with Trigorin. It's like your readers will say..."More. I want more!"
I also learned from him when he reviewed my poem. I hope you will not consider it next time but perhaps you can edit this one because you really have a good concept.

[Trigorin]

You have a good concept here, but I feel like you could expand this more. As it stands it's very brief and nebulous, and it doesn't really feel resolved at all.

[Love.Laugh.Live.]

Thank you very much! I will consider this the next time I write a poem.