The Will Of My Angels.

Let it rain,

Rain down on me

‘til the drains are clear of me.

 

Let it snow

Bucket-loads on me

‘til the fireplace glow forgets me.

 

Let it hail,

Leaving purple stains on me

‘til the barrage does away with me.

 

Let it sing to me

In the sky-fallen harmonies

Of a blissful, eternal peace.

 

Let it be

The will of my angels

To fly with me.

Reviews

[Shayn00n]

i love this i definitly feel it

[Edward Clay]

very touching. i think certain lines here strike a poignancy with relation to the poems titles:
"'till the fireplace glow forgets me" ... "leaving purple stains on me".

very peaceful and tranquil, but with an undertone of something a litle more chaotic - i cant quite explain it.

[fireblossom]

Crap. Not your writing...the way I feel reading it. I feel like quiting. :-)

You have a real gift. Like a great musician your spirit shines through your writing. I made a study of you on myspace...to figure out where this comes from. I saw a person with definite ideas and opinions. I saw a loving woman surrounded by real friends. However, your writing isn't of an opinionated satisfied woman. It is of a person who watches and thinks, who allows experience to leave an impression. Very interesting.

Anyhow, (gush gush), this poem is short and as usual tasty to the point of making one want a second helping. That's your gift. You step aside and allow the impressions to flow. Thank ---- for your great gift. I know it transcends poetry and gives you an interesting life.

All the best

firedad

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

a sense of peace radiates from this...great write! :)

[Adam Greenfield]

Very peaceful feeling I got from this. Plus, I love the "Let it..." repitition. I'm a big fan of repitition. I'm a big fan of repitition.

Yeah, you're good at this writing stuff.