NAMELESS (for now)

I dont know im basicly just typing .0. What comes to mind at the moment

When i said what i said,

i ment it,but you didnt understand it.,

It's clear to see you dont care for me,

Why cant i let you go?,All we do is row.

 

You make me feel so alive,

i cant let you go,But i need to.

This life is unfair, The fact i fell for you

I cant take back what i said to you.

 

No more looking into your eyes,

The lights are dim but,..

No more looking into your eye's.

 

I dont know what do,

The world is spinning,

my thoughts so confusing,

this is it, Isnt it?,

The end of you and me?.

 

As much as it pains me to see or say,

Im going to let you go and walk away,

Not to look back beacuse its best for you,

So it cant be a mistake.

 

So goodbye to you,

Just rember you will always be loved,

Even from this distance i still care,

Even if were not together,Im always there.

 

Author's Note

:/. Dont judge it. Just read it :). It may not be amazing and it may not be finished but the thoughts from pen to paper is what counts :)

Reviews

[cfix]

This is so deep really, by deep i mean powerful emotion wise.
This is well expressed and so well written. judging is for fools.
I would never do that to anyone.

[ClosingAccount]

I enjoy this poem! I don't judge by the way!